IELTS Module: What are the main Health Problems in your Country?

Speaking Module Part-3
What are the main health problems in your country?

Before:
Indonesia is a country located at the equatorial, tropical climate with two seasons: the rainy season and dry season.

In the rainy season, a lot of standing water (puddle) in clogged gutters, thus inviting mosquitoes to lay their eggs there. The result,  often arise dengue fever, cikungunya and diarrheal diseases, from eating foods that are not clean, because dirty water.

In the hot dry season, the immune system tends to decrease. In addition, dry air, reduced water resources, a lot of flies and dust. Skin and respiratory diseases that often appear in the season.

So that's some of the health problems that occur.

After: -- with colorfull expression --
Indonesia is a nation state that is located at the equatorial, tropical climate with two seasons: the wet season and dry season.

In the rainy period, a lot of standing water or puddle in blocked gutters, consequently fascinating mosquitoes to put down their seed there. The effect, repeatedly arise dengue fever, cikungunya and diarrheal diseases, from foodstuff that are not hygienic, because of dirty water.

In the hot dry term, the immune of human body system tends to dwindle. In addition, dry air, condensed water resources, a lot of flies and dust. Skin and respiratory diseases that often appear in that time.

So that's a few of the health problems that occur in my land.

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Indonesia adalah negara yang terletak di katulistiwa, beriklim tropis dengan dua musim, yaitu musim hujan dan musim kemarau.

Di musim hujan, akan banyak air yang tergenang di selokan yang tersumbat, sehingga mengundang nyamuk untuk bertelur di sana. Di musim hujan sering timbul penyakit demam berdarah, cikungunya dan penyakit diare akibat memakan makanan yang tidak bersih, karena air yang kotor.

Di musim kemarau yang panas, daya tahan tubuh cenderung menurun. Selain itu, udara kering, sumber air berkurang, banyak lalat dan debu. Penyakit kulit dan pernafasan yang sering muncul di musim tersebut.

Jadi itulah beberapa masalah kesehatan yang terjadi.

IELTS Module: What things to do people to protect their health?

Speaking Module Part-3
What things to do people to protect their health?

Before:
Start small, because of the small things that you become accustomed to this, such as cleaning hands before eating, used to drink water every day, avoid high cholesterol foods such as organ meats, padang food (many curry) and fried food.

Use a disposable cooking oil, because oil is used more than twice is not healthy, saturated fat will appear in there as the cause of cholesterol, do sports to move your body and do not forget to brush your teeth before bed.

It's the little things to do to protect your health.

After: -- with colorfull expression --
Start small, because of the small stuff, you turn out to be accustomed to those. Such as washing your hands before consume fare, habituate to gulp water every day, keep away from lofty cholesterol foods such as limb meats, padang cooking  and fried foodstuff.

Use a disposable cooking oil, because oil which is used more than two times is not healthy, saturated fat will materialize in there as the source of cholesterol, do exercise to shift your body and do not fail to remember to brush your teeth before bed.

It's a little things to do to protect your health.

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Hal apa yang harus dilakukan orang untuk melindungi kesehatan mereka

Mulailah dari yang kecil, karena dari hal-hal yang kecil inilah anda menjadi terbiasa, seperti membersihkan tangan sebelum makan, membiasakan minum air putih setiap hari, menghindari makanan yang berkolesterol tinggi seperti jeroan, makanan padang (banyak kare) dan gorengan.

Gunakanlah minyak goreng sekali pakai, karena minyak yang dipakai lebih dari dua kali adalah tidak sehat, lemak jenuh akan muncul di sana sebagai penyebab kolesterol, lakukan olah-raga untuk menggerakkan badanmu dan jangan lupa gosok gigi sebelum tidur.

Hal-hal kecil inilah yang harus dilakukan untuk melindungi kesehatan anda.

IELTS: Use un-common word to Colorful your Ideas!!

Use un-common word to colorful your ideas!!

Use infrequent expression  to bright your thoughts!!

Task#3

Before:

Tennis is a wonderful game

To play tennis well you have to be very determined

I enjoy playing tennis

I enjoy watching tennis

After:

Tennis is an astonishing competition

To take part in tennis well you have to be very strong-minded

I like playing tennis

I enjoy watching tennis

Using Conjunctions:

Tennis is an astonishing competition and in order to take part in this match well, you have to be very strong-minded, that is why I like playing and watching it.

Task#4

Before:

I live in an apartment

The apartment is small

I want to have a larger place to live

One day I will

After:

 I stay in a private house

The dwelling is undersized

I desire to own a better environment to breathe

One day I will

Using Conjunctions:

I stay in a private house but the dwelling is undersized and I desire to own a better environment to breathe, hopefully one day I will.

Task#6

Before:

My school is very large

There were hundreds of children at my school

It was impossible to know everyone at the school

I did not known all the teachers

After:

My institution is tremendous

There were hundreds of kids at this place

It was impractical to be acquainted with each person at the school

I did not well-known every one of the teachers

Using Conjunctions:

My institution is tremendous and hundreds of kids, there, so that was impractical to be acquainted with each person and also I did not well-known every teacher.

Task#7

Before:

I love movies

I like watching TV

I don’t like live theatre

I don’t like opera

After:

I feel affection for cinema

I like to look on TV

I unlike live performing arts

I unlike musical drama

Using Conjunctions:

I feel affection for cinema, as well as I look on TV, but I unlike live performing arts, and musical drama either.

Task#7

Before:

I (swim/run) to keep fit

Keeping fit is important

People who are not fit can get sick easily

It is difficult to study if you are sick

After:

I keep jogging to stay in shape

Care healthy is central

Citizens who are out of condition can obtain ill without doubt

It is thorny to learning if you are unwell

Using Conjunctions:

I keep jogging to stay in shape, because care healthy is central, nevertheless citizens who are out of condition, can obtain ill without doubt, with the result that is thorny to learning if you are unwell.

IELTS: Global Template for Sentence

I           eat

ëû         ëû         2 slot

S          P          à good sentence

I           eat       à eat º action type

I           sleep   à sleep º action type

I           eat       chicken

ëû         ëû         ëû

S          P          O         à something do something

I           sleep

ëû         ëû         2 slot enough

S          P          à do something within himself (feel, think, …)

S P O K Hand à Live long and Prosperity

rarely               fried                                                     at KFC

I           eat       chicken            with     my mother

K: extra information additional

SPOK template à English º Bahasa º global template

Every sentence must complete at least 1 S , 1 P

I           …         happy  à happy º no action

ëû         ëû         ëû

S          to be    K          à to be is needed when there is no action

I           am/was           happy  à happy º no action

Conclusion:     K          S          K          P         K          O         K          Þ        Right Hand

what about?? I hope Û my hope Þ two type of word

ACTION P AND NO-ACTION

Action = 4

                        1)         eat      

                        2)         ate       (1) & (2) Regular

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                        3)         eaten   (3) & (4) Special

                        4)         eating

Pay Attention!! à Must Care & Focus.

Regular Form

Style-1: F – U – N

Fact: the Truth, true all the time

Usual: Regularly, again & again, every..

Normal: prevalent, ordinary

Style-2: OLD

Happen before ‘now’ à now º you say

“Yesterday”

worked (spell: workd + dèh!)

watched (spell: watchd + dèh!)

No-Action = thumb

to be (2B)

1) FUN: is, am, are

2) OLD: was, were

Special Form

Style-3: CEPEK Þ C – EF – EX

(+) hand º has, have, had, no-action (have been)

Complete: to show-off, to convince, to make sure (ie. already, not yet)

à ie. I have finished already (message to convince)

Effect: to create attention, to attract (ie. just)

Experience: not usual, unique, give a highlight (ie. ever, never)

There is a hidden message à hidden by hand

Style-4: LAGI, in progress

be [ is am are / was, were ] + ….ing

Style-5: Combination of 3&4 (hand + lagi)

Focus on the TIME è TIME BOMB!!, C-4

Since: Starting time

For: Length of time

à ie. I have been teaching for 8 years

PASSIVE P = 2B+3 (to be + action-3)

Chicken           2B

1)      is

2)      was

3)      has been

4)      is / was being

5)      has been (C-4)

     eaten (action-3)

Oke, those are the summaries of global sentence or grammatical.

IELTS Module: Which do you think is more important health or money?

Speaking Module Part-3
Which do you think is more important health or money?
Hmm, well, this is the tough question I guess.

(1) But if we compare both of them, health is the necessary condition while money is the sufficient condition. We need both of them, in order to live happily . But as you can see, the necessary condition is always more important.
(2) There is not enough money in the world to buy excellent health. It is priceless. You can ask any wealthy person who is confined to a wheelchair or dying of cancer. I think they have the same answer.
(3) But however; through the hard work, you can always earn more money, so a good health is far more important than money.

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Yang mana menurut Anda yang lebih penting, Kesehatan atau Uang?
Ehmm..well, saya kira ini adalah pertanyaan yang sulit..

(1) Namun apabila kita banding keduanya, kesehatan adalah kondisi yang dibutuhkan, sementara uang adalah kondisi ketercukupan. Kita membutuhkan keduanya, untuk hidup bahagia. Namun seperti yang terlihat bahwa kondisi yang dibutuhkan adalah selalu lebih penting.
(2) Banyaknya uang di dunia tidaklah cukup untuk membeli kesehatan yang terbaik. Kesehatan tak ternilai harganya. Anda dapat menanyakannya pada orang kaya yang terduduk di kursi roda atau sedang sekarat karena penyakit kanker. Saya pikir mereka akan memiliki jawaban yang sama.
(3) Tetapi bagaimanapun juga, melalui kerja keras, Anda selalu bisa memperoleh lebih banyak uang, sehingga kesehatan yang baik adalah jauh lebih penting daripada uang.

Source:

• More Important Than Money
• Health is more important than money
• Health Is More Important Than Wealth

IELTS Module: Why is it important to stay healthy?

Speaking Module Part-3
Why is it important to stay healthy?
OK, right now we discuss about the healthiness topic..

(1) It is important to keep yourself healthy because good health leads to everything good that happen in your life.
(2) It makes you feel confident, conscious, alert and awake.
(3) Being healthy is not just for a good image towards others but it is a life giver.
(4) Without a healthy well-being, you may be prone to all kinds of sickness.
(5) You would easily become weak and could not do other things. That is why health is the most important thing you must take care and protect.

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Mengapa kesehatan itu penting?
Oke, sekarang kita membahas tentang topik kesehatan..

(1) Menjaga kesehatan diri kita itu penting karena kondisi badan yang baik dan sehat cenderung mengarah kepada hal-hal yang baik di dalam hidup Anda.
(2) Hal ini akan membuat Anda merasa lebih percaya diri, sadar, waspada dan terjaga.
(3) Menjadi sehat tidak hanya membuat baik citra kita di hadapan orang lain, namun memberikan kita lebih hidup.
(4) Tanpa badan yang sehat, Anda mungkin rentan terhadap segala macam penyakit. Anda menjadi mudah capek dan tidak bisa melakukan apa-apa lagi.
(5) Itulah sebabnya kesehatan adalah hal yang paling penting yang harus Anda perhatikan dan jaga dengan baik.


Source:

• Why is it important to keep yourself healthy - Wiki Answers
• Google Translate