IELTS: Use un-common word to Colorful your Ideas!!

Use un-common word to colorful your ideas!!

Use infrequent expression  to bright your thoughts!!

Task#3

Before:

Tennis is a wonderful game

To play tennis well you have to be very determined

I enjoy playing tennis

I enjoy watching tennis

After:

Tennis is an astonishing competition

To take part in tennis well you have to be very strong-minded

I like playing tennis

I enjoy watching tennis

Using Conjunctions:

Tennis is an astonishing competition and in order to take part in this match well, you have to be very strong-minded, that is why I like playing and watching it.

Task#4

Before:

I live in an apartment

The apartment is small

I want to have a larger place to live

One day I will

After:

 I stay in a private house

The dwelling is undersized

I desire to own a better environment to breathe

One day I will

Using Conjunctions:

I stay in a private house but the dwelling is undersized and I desire to own a better environment to breathe, hopefully one day I will.

Task#6

Before:

My school is very large

There were hundreds of children at my school

It was impossible to know everyone at the school

I did not known all the teachers

After:

My institution is tremendous

There were hundreds of kids at this place

It was impractical to be acquainted with each person at the school

I did not well-known every one of the teachers

Using Conjunctions:

My institution is tremendous and hundreds of kids, there, so that was impractical to be acquainted with each person and also I did not well-known every teacher.

Task#7

Before:

I love movies

I like watching TV

I don’t like live theatre

I don’t like opera

After:

I feel affection for cinema

I like to look on TV

I unlike live performing arts

I unlike musical drama

Using Conjunctions:

I feel affection for cinema, as well as I look on TV, but I unlike live performing arts, and musical drama either.

Task#7

Before:

I (swim/run) to keep fit

Keeping fit is important

People who are not fit can get sick easily

It is difficult to study if you are sick

After:

I keep jogging to stay in shape

Care healthy is central

Citizens who are out of condition can obtain ill without doubt

It is thorny to learning if you are unwell

Using Conjunctions:

I keep jogging to stay in shape, because care healthy is central, nevertheless citizens who are out of condition, can obtain ill without doubt, with the result that is thorny to learning if you are unwell.